A new day, a new beginning

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by iscreamchocolate, Aug 15, 2005.

  1. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    Through the rippling waves of emotion lies a girl with a naked soul... Reaching out through the insanity, wanting only but purity. Flowing through the clear waters, feeling the secure touch of the waters arms wrapped secuirly around her physical being and warming all her hearts and souls. She was once but very depressed and trying to reach out to the world for help. People thought she was a drama queen because of her sadness and because of her scars from depressive behavior... She then opened her eyes as if waking from a dream, she wakes up feeling a sense of happiness yet a sense of loss.. A sense of loss that her depression has stayed with her through-out her whole life and now is gone (or mostly gone). She feels that all her depression has changed to positive energy and can help others through their very problems... She lies within Mother natures grasp and falls asleep so hushed... Waiting for a new day, a new beginning. Every day is a new beginning.. And a new beginning is a new day.
  2. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

    Excellent. I felt like I was standing on a bridge between two worlds when I read this. Very stylish.
  3. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    haha thank you white scorpion

    JJ DIAMOND Member

    That was beautiful iscream, very spiritual nice, your very talented.
  5. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    aww thank you JJ DIAMOND

    JJ DIAMOND Member

    your welcome, keep writing, your good.
  7. I liked it until this part... from here on it is too much of a summary...
  8. lozolo

    lozolo Member

    i like your words!
  9. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    thank you guys for your comments and stuff :)
  10. Your writing always gives me inspiration to complete my own stuff.

    p.s Did you ever find your black tank top?
  11. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

    awwww that's so sweet you actually remember my black tanktop?? haha. Yes actually. I just found it lastnight. :) I'm glad my writing gives you that inspiration. Nobody has ever said that before. :D

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