A Journey

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ChaosPandion, Apr 28, 2007.

  1. ChaosPandion

    ChaosPandion Member

    Today I had a little bit of inspiration and wrote a short poem on my journey with a few friends up a little mountain.

    Do not trespass the sign did say

    We cared little so anyway

    We started on our faithful trek

    Far below no more than a speck

    Far above our heads lines did lay

    Flowing current never at bay

    We’ve reached the top, the view was clear

    Cars below we could barely hear
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

    Interesting poem! Good job :)
  3. dylanzeppelin

    dylanzeppelin daydream believer

    about to jump?
  4. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    Im not sure what the lines were above your heads.. clouds?
    I just happen to be a terrible poem analyzer.
    But i did enjoy it : ). It took me somewhere. That was nice : )

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