beautiful. love that kinda music. just the sounds of places like rainforests and stuff...mmm lovely..
\m/ rock on the sal! fingers crossed
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wow. profound. beautiful. and sad too.
nice beginning stanza, keeping working on it.
mmm spunk
meh. everyones already seen team america and now i have nobody to see it with :'(
i don't get on with any of my close relatives. ugh. pompous fools most of them.
*thumbs up*
crumbs, very socially sensitive subject....don't know how to reply coz i don't know if this really happened. well written though.
love it. simplistic yet orchestrated cleverly, with vague sense of not understanding, but partly understanding...
I'm 63% apparently lol "You are not a child of the 60’s but your heart is true to the cause, man. You realize that being a hippie is not just bell...
oooo who's the director?
crumbs! that's tres cool:p
hahaha...hard to read as such a big file, but ...um...i have learnt very exciting and quintessential information from this family tree....? i have?
powerful. passionate. expressive. full of dynamic and effective language and structure.
i'm not sure if i get it yet... *reads again* the simplistic way you wrote this is cool coz it leaves it open for anyones individual...
that kinda reminds me of chinese emporers or buddhists...cool. am liking.
i'm in a delicate state today meep! :( *cries* anyhoo, that's off my chest...(lol random) your poem-i liked very much. it had a kinda light edge...
initial reaction to this poem was "ahhh so many words!", but then i've written some stuff as long as that too. read it though. did the heart...
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