totally killer with a nice flow good for drifting minds
it wasnt a specific time for me...and the term hippie is thrown around loosely. everybody calls me a hippy and stuff but they stereotype just like...
sounds killer to me.
i just read it and its lovely. truly beautiful feeling and a sense of being part of not only the earth but eachother and all. thanks for postin it...
ok here is "a lapse into planes" now that it is finished! sitting, in my zen garden my mind was so high i lapsed into nothing certain...
thanks all of you. i really appreciate the comments and compliments. ill post the rest when i finish it. thanks again!
this is all i have so far..im still finishing it sitting in my zen garden my mind was so high i lapsed into nothing certain (other than that...
nice song. and i liked your mention of the moon...i have some obsession with the moon or something..but anyway. nice song man!
i loved your poem. i liked the comparrison of thoughts to a river that was a beautiful metaphor. righteous!
fog clouds my mind and extreme loss of time tripping through thought prosseces i've given up my life i'm not quite living i'm not quite dead...
the faint glow of sunlight over the valley's shoulder gives hope to the weak, and makes the bold bolder the sky fades purple and again goes my...
she's a bird she's a plain, soaring over head or gliding through your brain she's the wind in a field she's the breeze in summer making all the...
sounds totally wicked to me! :)
dude that was a totally wicked piece and i venerate you for it. beautiful words that entrance the mind all together. keep on trippin!
dude sweet...i was just listening to"the end" last night..anyways totally wicked poem the brilliant facts about a brilliant band.great job man
through the clouds within ones brain we see travelers traveling on such as a train and when they approach a destination unclear they tend to...
brilliant poem really. quite truthfull as well keep it up man
beautiful poem.....really shows depth
haha thanks once again. i definitely appreciate the compliment because im never sure how my poetry sounds
up so high in such abstract thought a place where a bird you would find not to high an area for physical presence only mind can enter this...
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