I wasn't sure at the start, but I quickly began to enjoy this poem. Nice one.
Sorry. This poem is amazing. It feels like you've looked inside my heart and found my greatest joy, but then you've looked inside my head and...
Now I'm crying.
Erm, wow. What else to say. Thanks.
Hmm, tricky one. I'd start by leaving the "I only paid 150 for it" part out ;o) Sorry, not much help am I. Hopefully there will be some decent...
I let my soul mate read this last night (seen as it was her who inspired me to write), she really like it, and I'm reallly happy!
I like your philosophy. Things are going wonderfully well. I let her read a poem that I had written last night (Animosity, it's posted on here...
Interesting comment, thanks. I can see what you mean about leaving the first part out, but I wrote the poem for a special someone and would hate...
Thank you, your comment means a lot. I've only just started writing poetry, and my last post took me ages to pluck up the courage. But this...
Racey :o)
Wow! I've had those nights (and days) of anger at the world, I've not yet ventured to putting them into words. I usually end up with a page of...
I think that poems can't really be judged by a poll. What you or I may think is a good poem may be, to someone else, an awful poem. Beauty is in...
A lovely feeling of autumn, thanks. Not that I'm in any way qualified to judge, but I stumbled on the bus line a little, it doesn't seem to flow...
"A sudden shuddering as I melt into you" Sweet :o)
Good work, and I too would like to hear it sung. Thanks for sharing.
Well, this is my second poem. I've kept it short(er), and I hope more to the point, as recommended in previous comments. It was actually easier...
They say that you are too young Fashionably late, with a smile They tell me that I should grow up Untimely am I? Time rivals birth Seconds...
Pumpkin seeds. I never realised this until chatting to my friend about why I am constantly horny. After a while she finally found out I've been...
Lovely girl, huge sunflower!!!!!
I've thought I might have been in the past, but that was until recently when I really fell in love. As has been said, you just know. You don't...
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