that was very well put. from one poet to another you did a wonderful job. two hearts=one soul
keep up the good work, my friend.you are a real poet and thats such a wonderful thing.
excellent work. everyone of your poems really capture the moment
i know about those fucked up times and i think you captured it well with your words
that was good. i really liked it . keep on writing my friend
show me your passion show me your love teach me the way and be true show me theres more of you spreadin the love the peace and the victory too...
get a security camera ,some motion lights,and a rottweiler
janis rocks but martin luther king does to.
i know now someones out there willing to listen to my words i found him a few days ago he listened and he heard the truth behind my writing...
definetly different
i agree it sounds more like rap but it was descent
pretty good. keep on writing
very well written and very true words
that must have been some xperience. the writing was very well put together.
welcome to the forums i hope you enjoy it here
welcome to the forums.hope you like it here.
that is repulsive.
wow. that was awesome. i love the way ti just pulls you in and i can also relate to what you went thru.keep it up. mann that was really good.
i like what you got so far. i agree it could have some more added also. good work
good work, keep writing
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