i felt happy to read it, that's what I felt. It's a good affirmation of life, which is something we all need sometimes. Even when it's a slow, sad...
Hey, this is really something, nice job. Good to see a long poem, too. I've been shortening up, influenced by haiku and the quatrain quango...
kicked in the ass by life this swill, this horrible cheap shit beer sends a bit of comfort * feeling low, on the deck thinking about all my...
Wow, this is somethin' else! You have one hell of a poem here, DEC :)
^haha ancient wisdom sounds strange new ideas don't resonate common sense has lost its logic must confusion be my fate?
by and large righty. but some things i'm lefty at. Like if i were to play the guitar (had i any sense of musical talent) i'd play left, and little...
2, but sometimes 3 or occasionally more. Depends. But i haven't washed my hair in... a year or so? A real long time anyways. Doesn't seem to need it.
wow dude, just wow. it's so simple and brief, but nothing else need be said. So small and brief, we are. Perfect.
Man, good poem, sad and frightening events. I've been keeping watch on these happenings too, and it just pisses me off. I have nothing staked in...
thank you saffron
I've been thinking lately about that image of the statue or man with the gold head, bronze chest, iron legs, and clay feet. I thought it was a...
Yay! More sylvan poetry to read! I tell you, man, you are one of my biggest inspirations/influences. I can't get enough of your poems. :)
Wow, this is impressive. Nice work
Not bad man. I liked the way you transitioned to finding the kittens with "or-" which to me simulates quite well that moment when you see...
Thank you both for your comments, I'm glad you liked it. But two poems, eh? I you're right, I could lose the whole last stanza and it'd read...
since when my friend were those shows ever reality? (still, I like that. rapture in a lawn chair or sunflower seed. nice :H )
Formeldahyde. What, do i want cancer or something? haha anyways, i rarely roll joints anymore, and have never been able to get them SUPER tight....
glad you enjoy my problems ganja goo you must love reality tv ;)
i hear you should drink first, then smoke. do it the other way around and you're screwed. I've always felt sick mixing, because i always smoked...
anyone know any ways to make a joint burn slower?
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