hell yeah man! I too loved the part about the storm, that was a perfectly executed image.
man that is so beautiful.
This is really good, man. It exactly describes my own feelings right now.
I like it. It's like, total resolution, the pain evaporating and you walk peacefully along the shore. Good work.
I agree with you, only I don't think christianity is faltering. it's alive and strong in all the americas, and africa. Not just catholicism, but...
sadly, I was just about to post this myself. I mean, I know we're all shocked and surprised, right?
It's good, and like Dietcoketree said it is something I can relate to...but it's so general. Maybe you could anchor it down a bit with some...
What she said, man. I loved the ending. :)
Hey man, good to see you posting your poems again. And to return with such a good one, well that's even better :) It's kind of sad, the lonliness...
Good god woman, this is truly a work of art! I loved the description of the lovers; and the "rant" about those who chop wood and eat turtle eggs...
There's a lot of posts here that I'm not going to read. Rangerdanger, are you telling me you, a veteran smoker, are only just now realizing...
Thanks, everyone. I also like the last stanza the least. I guess I'll write a new end for it.
Good luck. I don't forsee it being easy, with a minister for a father. My dad's gotten very religious in the last few years, and he often makes...
I'll throw down my $.02 I voted church leaders AND the congregations. For the most part, there's lip service to Jesus, and the Bible in general,...
haha :D
I see it as misplaced agression. Not sure if aggression is the right word... but these people, the truly enlightened type who actually practice...
you guys took seriously what I said as a joke. I thought it was obvious I was kidding around. :)
BluE, you're right, it's the attachment that counts. but sometimes I do feel like it's weighing me down. Life could be so much simpler without all...
I like some of these lines, but it seems a bit overly vague, so as to leave the reader perplexed as to what's even being said. You seem to drift...
Anyone ever read any books by Farley Mowat? This guy is becoming a favorite author of mine. He seems to write mainly nonfiction, but he tells it...
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