They called Korea the forgotten war. But it isn't, because we had M*A*S*H Thanks, Alan Alda
it bothers me because it could be the death of us all. And yes, there are moments when I am callous about it, forgeting about it in favor of "life...
I just wrote this, let me know what you think. Doom Times have always been mean-- Neolithic battle fields give proof to stone age war the...
Great how you tied in Thomas' poem, and your own imagery was damn good too. I like your style.
Man, that's great. As I was reading about your having them put in a jar, I started thinking, "well, there's your wisdom" which you ended up...
Man, there's something to this one, at least for me. Good job.
Maybe it was an angel, and a test of your hospitality? Good poem, anyways. :)
Wow, that was mighty engaging, pulled me right along. Good one!
Damn that's a lot of blunts. Well, it's your poem man, write what you will :)
Yeah, true, I got that, but it just didn't fit there. A different poem, maybe, but not that one. Just my opinion, though.
Samadhi Samadhi Samadhi, samadhi, o that you might come to me; o that it might be my fate, that no longer shall I wait. Sweet nirvana, moksha...
"One of the ridiculous things about being a poet is the huge gulf between how seriously we take ourselves and how generally we are ignored by...
Ah, nice. In about a month, I'm going to be longing for something like that, once winter, or the cold at least, sets in for good.
Those are nice, man. No better inspiration in the world than love. Only thing I didn't like was in the third one, the "smoking blunts with our...
Good deal. You guys won't regret it, it's the most rewarding meditation sort of thing I've ever done. It's amazing too, how when you get into...
I don't really meditate much anymore, I kind of lost "faith" in it; but lately I've been doing this thing called a heart meditation. I heard about...
Pretty good for a first poem! My first ones all sucked terribly (and many still do, haha), so you're a step ahead in the game. :) The main...
Wow, that's crazy man. Jealousy and obcession mounting to a tragic crescendo. Good stuff
Safety The fly, sitting on the swatter, is denied even the exhilaration of that swinging death. In a place of utter safety, so close to the...
I see what you mean. Everything else is so straightforward, but there you get metaphorical.
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