It is good to see someone 19 reaching out for feedback. I wanted to add to the post to give an example on image that happened for me in a similar...
Timber Bridge It stands between here and there, and as I walk upon it festival music, laughter, taps along the water from the distant lake shore...
The rhyming scheme was good, but I recall a tool (enjambment) some poets use to reduce how a rhyme scheme can overpower a poem, especially...
This part worked for me... keep writing!
Amber, I'm glad you liked it! Red, you did capture what was in my head exactly. I used the word "darkened" to describe the soldiers because it...
this was truly an original and well-thought out poem, nice!
wow, this one is incredible. there are at least three favorite lines for me in this one, but the first is: praying his life ain't gonna flash...
I agree with all, very nice poem blkrubbersoul... keep writing !
Joining some of the others by keeping an open thread of my work. I hope some of you will find a poem or two enjoyable or inspirational for your...
Nice! I kind of liked the word "beneath" in front of crumpled sheets... I different visual altogether when beneath the crumpled sheets. I would...
this is good rabbitholes! sometimes, less is better. Your title is strong, gives us all we need to know... so if you trim it down and rid it of...
an incantation to your muse... draft of a poem I wrote back in October... thought it felt right for today. I hope it holds some meaning for you....
I see you haven't found that muse again. hmmm... I did love Escape. I also like Skyfires metaphor exercise... sometimes... you have to become...
Who is this person sitting on the bank of the river watching it flow peacefully? Listening to soft music playing in her head, a smile in her...
I wish I had something positive to say on this one... it didn't work for me... I'm trying to pinpoint why but I'm not sure. Perhaps the idea of a...
healing vibes sent your way naturefreak. I was saddened to hear about your loss.
You write amazing poetry... the title was the only thing I would change... I would call this "Tell Me Your Name"... Common Love seemed to take...
very beautiful...
I know the poet's name but have not studied his work... thanks for sharing. May have to look him up. This was a beautiful poem. branchless...
Kitten, I liked both of your last posts, Shadenfreude and Train of Thought... I looked up Shadenfreude and learned a new word... but it confused...
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