Excellent vibe here! I really love that technique of the quirky rhyme between the line break... within this pieces simplicity it's particularly...
this is beautiful... very well written... I get that "world doomed to sadness" vibe I used to feel not too long ago... thanks for sharing it
Effexor "withdrawal" is very common (Photogra explained what you're experiencing perfectly). I experienced mild repurcussions from coming off of...
The only ones I'd actually say I'd met, as in got to sit and talk with them, would be Ani DiFranco and Muggs from Cypress Hill (a total fluke...
I'm with Blackguard; I would've said 3 times up until about a year and a half ago; but until then I didn't know what heartbreak was. I'm lucky to...
Hard to pick just one; but I can narrow it down to my three favorites, each for different reasons… Keith Moon because he’s psychotic and...
the audiophile has 4 inputs already and software can do everything (and more) than a mixer can, with higher quality results. that's definitely not...
For starters, get an m-audio soundcard. For a microphone, get the best you can with whatever money you’ve got left over, but more than likely a...
Rand Al'Thor, but really any of Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time characters, they're like family to me now :) Yossarian - Catch 22 Alex - Clockwork...
now that was quite refreshing :) a most excellent job on every level, from beginning to end. I thoroughly enjoyed this; in fact, it's pretty...
thanks for the comments! those days aren't too far in the past, but they are behind me now and I'm way happier for it, and I did learn alot from...
Give me my guitar mic’d to the reel recording chords, orchestral oceans and syntho-pop in basso tone Give me an endtable with a dark shade lamp...
this actually makes amazing sense to me, lol excellent job :)
excellent job with this one! wonderful word choice, even though I had to investigate on alaap ;)enjoyed this thoroughly, thanks!
hehe, this one is familiar… I had that same nightly ritual for a good little while there. Life: if you aren’t an alcoholic, you haven’t been...
Liked the vibe of this one, and I think your first five lines were your strongest. There was more of a concrete quality to them, like you’re...
we were legendary in entwined positions, in warm, fluttering candle light, expressing pleasure as a primal dreamed momentum our entirety...
I'm just about the opposite of kidder, lol :) I’m not too big on simplicity in poetry, I think that’s probably the hardest way to write poetry....
Yes, and it went Horrible (that's right, with a capital H)! Not only were we good friends, but we kinda had the same circle of friends, which...
Almost sounds like you're on the rebound from a relationship you didn't have! But I do know what you’re talking about… and I think you have two...
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