I love love love stuff like this! Great poem, great picture, and both together take it to new heights, which is exactly what should be happening....
I did the special dates, the flowers, and those heartfelt presents; none of that stuff worked for my ex and I. Sometimes it’d be great, but it’d...
I keep meaning to get over here and comment, but time has been quite limited for me lately; but anyways! I loved the structure of –enough- … it...
Loved this! Haven’t seen a great sonnet around here in a while... and while it’s not a form I like to write in, it’s nice to read one that’s done...
The Beatles: Rubber Soul
You have to take orders if you signed that contract. Even if you only signed a letter of intent, your contractually bound to sign with the...
It's that big label that's forcing these bands to write the albums the way they are. When you’re signed like that; you do what the label wants...
a countdown came creeping across the apartment as a viscous ticking clock with alarm set to toll & pitching elbows on the coffee table, I watched...
agree with all that's been said here; great poem... very effective! thanks for sharing it :)
loved the raw emotion you presented here... I enjoyed alot :)
excellent collection, saff! your first was my favorite, but the second had my favorite line... powerful, passionate imagery! You seem to have...
she came striking; the green viper queen, rhythmic and writhing behind impulsive mirage with her viral allure, and her everlasting riptide...
Beautiful concrete poem! [/center] That's just delicious delivery... I enjoyed this one mucho!
I'm loving your style... you've got fantastic imagery that comes out with a unique vibe and your flow is spot on as well. I agree with Hippievixen...
I'm glad this got pulled back to the top... I read it the other day and didn't have time to comment, but I do now and this is perfect... it's a...
thanks for the replies, everyone... I found a crappy, unfinished version of this written on the back of a receipt and stuffed in a pocket in one...
yesterdays have resurfaced from the closet’s top shelf from the photo album, the bored collages of remember this and this so I won’t ever...
I'm with you there, except I record when I want and plan to distribute how I want. Getting "signed" is selling your soul away, as well as your...
what a great image! -weakness- was awesome as well! I'd comment more but brain function malfunctioning due to sickness :mad:
I can just about credit it with saving my life as well. I could feel a difference within just a few days, if not the very next. Coming off of it...
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