You left him for a reason. You don’t want to be the person that he’s missing so much right now. Now he’s showing you that he cares, or is it that...
I really don’t think you did anything wrong, whereas I think my ex did; she was so spiteful about it. I was just illustrating where your guy might...
Wow, this brings back some memories, so forgive me if I sound a little harsh, I don’t mean to, but I went through almost the exact same situation,...
I post all my lyrics here, and I couldn't begin to tell you the chord names; I almost always use open chord variants and triads.......
When I had just gotten my license, my girl and I were feeling horny and having no place to go, we cruised out into the country and down a old...
I love the rock and roll is dead statement… it’s not dead, there just hasn’t been a group that’s made it mainstream in a long while. And if they...
Yeah, you would. Psychological abuse is a vicious thing. It already seems like she’s doing the whole on again/off again thing; which will wear you...
I’ll be damned if this girl doesn’t sound like a bpd (borderline personality), but even if she’s not, you should run like holy hell away from this...
This, I think, is the best advice. When I write a poem for somebody, I want them to know beyond a shadow of a doubt that it's for them.
I don’t practice anymore… at all, lol. I used to practice constantly though, but never any covers and stuff; just jams and trying to write...
We’ll broadcast modulations baby, yeah, we’ll broadcast our bodies into that black astral ink you think divines tomorrow, and we’ll do it from...
This feels like an excert of 10 seconds worth of thoughts while tripping! I do think that you could trim down some of your lines a little, and add...
loved both of these, saff! very passionate, with a very tangible element to it that's rare to feel in poetry... thanks for that!
I agree with cheshire on this; it's amazing, and I love the mythic greek theme. That first stanza, especially, is stunning. You've such a great...
this is great, *electrica* love the personal intensity, how there's volumes that could be spoken between the lines... one of the best I've read...
Enjoyed this! I liked your use of repetition, and your theme is always one that's kinda familiar in a wierd way!
I've said it before, but again, I love the diary feel this thread has. It seems therapeutic! -abandonment- is great, although I'm not fond of the...
perfection! that was beautiful, elegant, and profound. nearly leaves me speechless! thanks for sharing it :)
ah, but see, I can tell that it's personal, I can see what happened... but I can't see anything specific of what happened or feel the emotions....
Excellent poem, you prick :p Actually, I meant to comment on this yesterday, but yesterday sucked for commenting, so I'm glad you bumped it......
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