Wow, no threads about this… well, if you liked the original; you’re going to love the directors cut… there’s around 30-45 minutes of additional...
wow... that's just about left me speechless. you've definitely got some talent! that was sheer perfection, imo :)
julie overcame accountability and pain to hang at the horizon in the orange/red melting tinge, her blood full of chemicals, yay, whose potency...
the breeders did a pretty cool cover of happiness is a warm gun weezer's cover of velouria is top notch too
that short buzz cut with the back of the head spiked up
at first, I thought, no; they haven't changed at all. but that's definitely not true. I've built up some stereotypes, and wouldn't give the...
I love my classic rock, but I got to go with techno, because it's the only genre I can see pushing the rest of music as a whole into places it...
I like some techno. I don't like house and trance, though. Amon Tobin is my favorite as far as an all inclusive choice; that boy goes all over the...
I saw you baby, thinking your x-ray eyes were disguised, that your glare would pass by as a passing glance, hidden by the distance between you...
Great wordplay, no cliche's, fantastic images, and an interesting concept. I'm really loving your style, and look forward to reading some more! :)
I enjoyed this, firebelle! The last stanza seems fine to me as well, though I think you should include the word "It's" in your future options of...
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Brought to mind Peter Gabriel's song "wallflower"... very power work you've done here!
very sad poem... I've lost some family to cancer to; it's a horrible thing to witness. I couldn't imagine trying to write about it either; your...
excellent poem, kidder; I like the nostalgic feeling... especially with this style of poem.
I think this is probably one of the more complicated questions that's been asked on this forum. I sympathize with your situation, but don't think...
Well, I do think it's kinda harsh. It's pretty hard to recognize those traits in somebody, especially if they don’t trust psychologists and...
1. red flags should never be ignored, they become monsterous issues later on. 2. you can't make someone happy who's not happy with themselves....
I like a little of everything, but if I had to choose a favorite; it'd just be the simple rock anthem style. The Beatles, The Who, Bowie… it’s...
I guess I'm a little jealous of people that are talented both technically and creatively, because I went through a stage where I set the guitar...
great technique and images, although the "window of my soul" line came as a little too cliche in a poem otherwise filled with wonderful...
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