rach, is your cat found yet? i'll keep praying...cute poem! :)
wow this is like a messy emotional tempest! good strong piece duck, don't stop writing.
this a good piece electrica...i haven't been able to write for a while...but came out with a similarly unexpected piece today! is this one based...
hey buddha that's great news! love your pieces btw, the style is so totally cool
wow wow WOW ashers...that...wow....just,,,painting.....it's so amazing!
wow yeah very sensual. great stuff heron
yeah of course:p ..what kind of paint though?
good idea. also, on the subject of comments and critiquing....i think it would be a good idea if you see a post that hasn't had a reply and be the...
rafaela-*blush* thanks raf it's nice to have a fan! kittenx-cheers for reading it:) trippin-thanks for the critique, i need to explain the poem...
nice to meet you too *bows*nice...i'm not a weed doer meself...but fair do :p
what did you use to make it?
hmm, would there be a way to get a mod to merge people's threads so that individuals would have like one thread each for their poems? i...
agreed. it's pretty cool. nice play on the 'mary, mary' nursery rhyme. what's it about? does it have deeper meaning?
Every pace (within the race of knotholes) lies a man in corpse corporal green, smudged. His breath, adept in icy froths begins to choke on...
this poem seems simple and raw...in a good way of course! Its simplicity makes the emotion more apparent and intense.hope you're ok honey *hugs*
i love reading your poetry. just wanted to say that even if i don't comment much or at all on any of these poems, it doesn't mean i'm not reading...
i second that motion!,....well...3rd it...:p java you write like a tree exists... (ok, that was a weird thing to say haha)
don't wozzle, dandi's alive!..as for where she is..i have no idea..
i got through. my dads ok. i think this calls for prayer time. bye guys.
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