ouch:(
sorry i didn't comment earlier! just checking for any poems with no posts that i can ponder over.... i like the idea of big eyes, your poem...
'unobliterated' and 'languid' hehe love those words! good description and image you've created. nice concise piece too:)
ooo this is a different direction to take... about smoking or something? or metaphorical smoking....something inside you is burning up maybe?
ah cool more of your stuff! you say this is not your best, but it's really not that bad. i like the image of the frozen rose...
wow. this makes me feel...helpless. like i feel now actually....
Ahhh! You make me sick when you walk down that aisle! Your too-bright dress with your too-bright shoes! That achey-breaky heart you said would die...
i got my poets mixed up!!! owen sassoon brookes and graves....gah! ah well...started off ok, then i think my brain got confused...extracts were...
What deepest chunks of leaves you bite, when in the forest, trees doth flight from everwilting, lucid skies, the pyres that burn escape the night?...
An empty, fawning child within me cries, for processed perfection is out of reach. the only fiend demands a perfect ten, when all i learnt was new...
this one confuses me joker, but i like it anyway. 'my sorrow is written in blood on the letter'....mmm cool!
a true sentiment that should be shared by all. enjoy life! negativity really blows. good poem man *thumbs up*
another one of your powerful poems! congrats!
good imagery, nice poem:)
wowser! i like this, it made me laugh at first coz i find potatoes amusing:)
an educational read! i can get these visions from my pure imagination with no drug use haha!
drug-induced poem? :p good piece thelizardkingmike, mike....if that is your real name....:H i like this stanza... The jester with the bushy...
yeah mysti i like this one,i'd love to see more of your work. this piece is very broken hearted, very sad, but tis a good write
i hope so, but i'm pretty sure that i won't keep in contact with all of them sadly:( i have issues with one or two of those people. alas!
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