thanks everybody, ill try to keep on keepin' on
that was really fuckin good man, great imagery, great description, loved it
Flutter in Sound Constant imagery of the green hemlocks across the way As the birds chirp a delicate song to one another I wonder, do they...
thank you very much, i will post some more of my work soon
earlier this year(2006-2007) i was talking to this girl a lot. i really really liked her. i thought she was the most adorable thing on the planet,...
Part VII Storm clouds disintegrate in 47 minutes Storm clouds disintegrate in 46 minutes Storm clouds disintegrate in 45 minutes Storm...
Part VI Cross worded lovers in a decremental society shouting the scenes of atrocious loveless fathoms of death Who fucked next to the...
Part V Reaching the heavenly sanctuary after the amidst of this hellish journey Inner enlightenment, following the simple up most of life...
Part IV Neon moss growing infectiously over my doubted pages of rantings Untouched forests of rapturess quakings and second comings of the...
Part III Redeeming mirrors blessed the carvings in the pine tree Telling visions of death and fucking Torn shreds of dignity and cheap...
Part II Polka dotted censory and crumbled freeways of criss cross satires Switchblade thoughts thru empty headed speed freaks Images of...
Faces of Moksha Part I Sonic gates of rapture swaying purple and blue Do you believe in rapture they asked? I raced to hearts of...
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if i go thru the trouble to post it, will you read it?
i feel your pain my friend, ive never had a girlfriend or kissed a girl
how doesnt like every guy that seees you come onto you?
saturn
that was fantastic dude, great rhyme scheme
that makes me happy, i posted this last year, or earlier this year i can remember, and no one read it, but thanks im glad you guys liked it, you...
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