No, no, no. There are no hippies. There are human beings and they vary widely one to the next. There are some artificial categories people use...
I thought about putting a sexually explicit piece or two here on Hip Forums. Trouble is, I don't like getting trashed by readers, I'm very...
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You removed the signature photograph of the girl with the butcher knife. I was asking, what's the point of showing a girl (yourself?) with a...
I sort of suspect that in the first paragraph she's farting on the toilet, for lack of a more poetic term. Well, women do that, let's face it,...
A kid getting run down in the street is perfect and controlled, and had to happen? Sorry, you lost me there.
You managed somehow to put together three couplets, but I think this gem belongs in the Politics thread somewhere, not the Writers Forum thread.
Heywood: One thing I was trying to do was get the reader to laugh. I don't think I succeeded in your case, and the other seventy readers I'm not...
Story would be improved if you deleted all the line skips between paragraphs. That can be done by using <shift/enter> instead of <enter> at end...
You might like to put your explanatory notes into your original piece, if you can do that without sacrificing style. That way, the reader will...
I can think of a few winners who convinced themselves they were losers and checked themselves out. American writers Ernest Hemingway, Richard...
Well, it's not exactly Mary Poppins. My first reaction is, she must be very masochistic to be with this macho fool loser. Second reaction,...
Fed up with where you are now? Good. Drag out the globe, determine your current location and tell us what is happening right now on the opposite...
Of course I'll respect you tomorrow! This thread reminds me of something from one of Casteneda's books. "Hurry up, Carlitos! Write it down!...
Electric guitars are just fine so long as they're unplugged. Also I'm not alone in my opinion. Have a great day. ******************* Say Gaia, I'm...
My mind set is so far from that of a teenage girl that I find it hard to identify. Spelling is good, grammar is not bad. Can't really identify...
Now that's what I call a short story.
Spelling and grammar are good. Story line is good but would work better as part of a longer piece telling us more about Ferguson's life. I felt...
Recently I read astronaut Edwin Aldrin's 1973 memoir 'Return to Earth'. While his autobiography was interesting, I found it hard to stomach his...
I believe in sorcery, demons, women, black magic, all that kind of stuff.
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