I don't know just how ignorant southern cops can be, but your story gives a nice double meaning to the term 'redneck'. I thought Canadian cops...
You need to give your reader some who/what/where/when/why. Otherwise, your reader won't be able to form a clear image of the story you're trying...
Good style, grammar and spelling. Also, you have the beginning of a story line here. Let's see some more.
Assuming for a moment that the piece is fiction, it comes across as a bit of black humour. The average straight person doesn't need aging drag...
''Moderation is the key." Well, moderation is what you're all about, Lizard King, isn't that so? Say, you don't have to send that signature...
Lizard King, your signature photo tells us everything we need to know, or want to know about you. But if we were all academics on this channel it...
Thanks. I have nothing to add to this piece. Also I went out on a limb writing it because I have no detective experience. I just dragged up all...
Dirtydog to Ground Control Houston. FIDO stands for Flight Dynamics Officer. There is no such thing as FIDO 3. And yes, acid has truly fried my...
Capcom to Lizard King. I have some good news and some bad news. The bad news is that the recovery ship is 800 km from your splashdown point. The...
Desmond Morris's book, "The Naked Ape", may answer some of your queries. Many first year university biology texts have a chapter or two on...
Ground control to Lizard King Mike. FIDO says your signal is coming down garbled due to a left yaw rate of .0032 rad/sec and you will have to fire...
Uh, okay, but I don't think you should be allowed to own a handgun or other firearm. Then again, in Maryland you'll probably fit right in....
That last sentence of yours doesn't translate. Is it Gaelic or something? As for my writing, I enjoy it, and I hope as many enjoy it as are...
Someone once said that dreaming may be the brain doing a file purge, computer style. Be that it as it may, I have this very common dream of...
I'm happy with being an under-achiever. You know something about the value-givers, the authorities, the teachers? They're dead or in nursing...
[img] Nevermore.
20 November 1918 Royal Military College Sandhurst, Berkshire, England When informed of the archduke's status, Colonel Julian Bandersnatch of the...
********** NEWS FLASH ********** (Reuters) (12 November 1918) Split, Croatia Franz Ferdinand and wife Sophie Chotek were found alive in a quiet...
How about a second chapter. Say your protagonist changes his mind about blowing his brains out, sells his gun, chucks his teaching job, drives...
Write about yourself and your friends, then. Change names and details where necessary to protect identities. Then hop a train to Wyoming (watch...
Separate names with a comma.
