"Creeping Thing" - might as well be up there as my favorite poem by you..it's so intriguing, makes me want to read it again and again.
"Evening Light" - ahh jeweled insects again :) I really liked the narrative in this one and the way you told it. "Telling" - haha wow I totally...
"butter blue darkness, old flowers waiting" mmmm I liked that.
"Song of the Red Desert" - your rhyme and flow are pretty incredible in this one. Soo smooth and polished and effortless, it was a joy to read....
Insane tempo, your style is insane (in a good way). If this is your raw stuff...your polished work must be sublime! Stay true.
:) Great descriptives! very tangible. And totally agree with vacuumed leaves..it was so windy here as well, perfect metaphor.
Of course.
"So it goes" is pretty much my motto in life. What a clever, witty poem!!
I don't have time for news, so when there is a fire licking the shores and baking the earth, or a new story of the old squabbles...
the invisible threads of nature tug and pull the cosmos, like a puppet twitching and writhing on the chopping block. the universe is one fussy...
Wow, wow, wow. Inspiration, also makes me wish I wrote it!! So good, I can't quote my favorite parts because I would just quote the whole thing.
"This is How it Happens" is pure genius. An absolute gem! I can't even express it enough how much I loved everything about it, the style, the...
Your ending is perfect for this poem. I think you just nailed it. I got a very spritely feeling from this one. In fact, the way you spoke of...
The untitled one is so brr chilly and very appropriate for autumn! I loved your play on words and personifications.
I'm flipping pages, I'm winding back the clock. Cued recall and I count all the common objects that dispatch encoded signals, (hand lines,...
This I could relate to, and I liked your simple (not boring), straight forward diction. It was clear and your emotions were vivid.
Welcome! I've enjoyed your writing. Keep posting. :)
It is nice to see a familiar face and quality writing. :) I hope to read more from you. I'm writing as well, every now and then.
Wow wow speechless...love loved them. Magical stuff!!
For me the topic is cliche. I didn't feel like the wording was terribly cliche, so I don't know if Andy was referring to the specific phrases or...
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