Wow this is painful, raw, angry, and honest. Good mix for a therapeutic poem. I read Dear Emma before reading this and I see those pieces going...
This is intriguing...great job planting an image, an idea in my head. I especially liked this part : "The day that my sail is set, meeting...
Mmm I'd agree more with something like "assisted suicide". Can't put all the blame on the masses. This is circular causality when things are not...
"I salted her annually as we've grown together...superfically fake. Apart in faint grand finale fashion, doing or dying. Sinking or swimming. In...
I'm gonna go plagiarize this now. Thanks! :D:p
Your words are bold and frantic and contagious. In my head everything cascades like fast spoken-word. I like this direction, especially seeing the...
I think you meant "petals" not "pedals". And ditto to what yyy said.
Just a suggestion, but I would put a comma after every "we are", I stumbled on the pace without it because lines would merge and read like this...
I like the feel of the weight of this bear shaped amulet dropping into the valley. It is secure. I am alone and content, casting side glances...
Defy me but don’t define me. Help me confront myself, let me sit here and be uncomfortable, let my thoughts simmer, hurt voice and words,...
Hi Major P. :) I came back with similar themes.
Tell me, why did you lose her? You've lost a precious kind of friend. Was it because you cared more about fleeting triflings and wanted to boast...
Halved pomegranate body, split open and fire raw on all sides. I’m spared but I am deeply scarred. My eyes are galaxies and eons fading...
I got home from class, there is no food and no clean dishes, but I’ve got shelter from the rain and wind and electricity to keep me company and...
I turn shit times into teatime with bread and jam, it’s all good, you’ve got your bars and hardcore bands, and mistakes that hurt so right, but...
There is so much to read and learn, absorb ideas that were birthed and battered, inhale life and let it shape the mind, instead of feeding on dead...
Thanks so much for your comments, I appreciate them and agree.
Hello Cold War mentality. United States has been meddling in the affairs of OTHER nations, what gives them the right? Because they're spreading...
I can't believe that people are blaming Russia and claiming that Russia is the aggressor here. Saakashvili attacks South Ossetia, a region with...
With each heavy step, my bones creak from fluid stagnant in its joints, as I get closer the angry skies prey on my head, when clouds burst my...
Separate names with a comma.
