Thanks a million kittenx...u seem to b my only fan these days..I really appreciate your continued support
Gypsy With Minneapolis for a crown he explains electromagnetism and how he will use it to build a light saber. Lanky fingers...
"chances are my words will not change a damn thing." very wisely put...go on and let him pay for rotten fruit, leaves the fresh stuff for you
love it.
those last two lines are great and I love the picture! very nice
I like your style, you're fun to read
wow. I'm surprised no one has commented on this! I thought it was very well thought out. do you ever read at open mic's? this is a great out loud...
these are my favorite bits, I like the personification of silence and that second bit is very strong, evocative
ahh, wonderful imagery and great cadence, I like it
not much traffic in here :( not like it used to be...
"Neo" was fun, nice trip, but I liked "Wouldnt That Be Funny" the best, it is so strong. The editor in me wants to tighten it up and punctuate,...
nice ending, i like that bit
(My pieces are always in a state of unrest so I'm sorry if I seem redundant...) Bartender’s Lament Its not even worth the candles’ time...
thanks guys :)
:) a compliment, I like your flow
beautiful. good to see u again kitten, hope you're well :)
this one's my favorite :) good energy
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Hi all, have been absent for a while, but figured I'd post some new stuff. Enjoy, if you please. Atlantic Twilight I cannot tell if it...
hey red i really liked this one the first time around, i'm glad you continue to work on it, you've really tightened it up a lot...can i just make...
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