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Haunted I am a liar; this world will never exist outside my self. Unconvinced of my sanity in the smallest hours of morning, between alive and...
good stuff..i really like the imagry in "mirage," and these lines: "Intention vs. compulsion? Intention guides compulsion. Intention overcomes...
song is stuck in my head now.. (Fleetwood Mac version)
very few 'round here can twist words and/or rhyme like you. of your latest, i quite enjoy "pop a molly" and this last one ^^
ah yes, a story well known..
the last 4 lines are wonderful..feel you 100%
try to break away from rhyming, open up..
ooh i like! very in the moment
been there! nice imagery
short and sweet! second stanza is good..
I do not understand your aim here. I, frankly, find your poems immature, especially given your proclaimed age. Do you have anything original?...
Hi Kitten, Cowardice and Intimacy are spot on, awesome poems. Love em. True stuff, very insightful. Hope you're well...
^ does that mean you didn't like it?
Boy and Girl He swings sticks as swords, runs in the sun, throws rocks at cats squirrels pedal-bikers, burns ants in a magnified...
Hi, I have a continued thread in the poetry forum, but its a little slow in there and I would like some feedback on this poem, any criticism is...
I like your stuff, great flow. Nice mix of cynicism and observation. I like the quote "the way i'se livin' was skewed indeed designer minds push...
Crows We are scavengers. Crows on a carcass picking the last rotted flesh from stark white broken bone. The dowry of a life’s work,...
X;7252999] but despite it all, if the fire needs more oxygen, and the canvas needs more oil, then i will be both. Girl..between that bit n the...
Well don't be shy..u can tell me what u think..I can take it ;)
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