Awesome ~~* ... quite an intro, thank you for sharing!
Powerful scope...
Very active; I loved 'Sleet.' You evoke so much texture; cycles, full of passion. Well done. :)
Indeed, nice visuals. This is a wonderful poem. Would you like any suggestions or will this be your final version?
Powerful feeling to this poem... vast stretches of lone/expansiveness; archaic misunderstandings ~~*
[IMG] I like how you paint with your words, great pictures... depth of feeling. Thanks for sharing
[IMG] Vast views and spacious sounds; strength in vulnerability
:) Much Love to your family and may this year be abundant.
She is already beautiful, I do so love the name Sophia may she grow in Wisdom, Beauty & Grace ~~* Bright Blessings
Softly spinning golden splendor; Runic snow crystals speak, Illumined by sacred sunlight, Balming the barren branch.
Equality, loving simply... feeding the hungry, housing the homeless & healing the sick; starting with Oneself, and sharing the Love, each...
Delicate power, dynamic beauty, your sounds harmonize with texture.
Embracing the Mystery ~~* loved this! thoughts racing, like a shower of morning stars; lingers... Much Love
Happy Birthday Lovely Lady! You sure do sit on a cake with style; Bright Blessings on your way and thank you for your many gifts of Love & Light...
inhaling learning exhaling creation; fragrant ruby dust luminous
Excellent vibe, very peaceful! I love when writers block shifts; relaxing into the sounds of Nature is awesome.
Nice rhythm... love to hear this poem as spoken word.
The first stanza seems too full, perhaps a different spacing... ~~* I wonder what thou does do for true love? Do I grab stars from the...
Well done! Quite a rich tapestry of feeling you have offered in this thread. I love the expansive environment within 'The Harvest' and am...
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your imagery. :) Imho, I would add the following changes: You see I never knew how beautiful the stars can...
Separate names with a comma.
