I swear I saw a dog in a suit lounging in the gutter. A mangy dog, a scrawny, urchin dog, in a suit covered in stampmarks smoking. Propped...
Stop revelling in my garbage, and I'll bring you in and feed you up once in a while. We'll stoke up a roaring fire, and I'll let you trip me up...
You are my playwright and I subscribe but cannot shake the fog of loners draped around my shoulders. The travelling salesman has my heart living...
My hangnails reek of devastation where you lingered, tip to tip, where I traced each rib, flared, laid bare. I'm biting my imprint now. You...
ha ha your brain scares me slightly at times Lozi!
Really like Trachea - brutal scratchy vocab - effective. Not sure about Immortality yet....let me ponder! :)
No amount of arousal dreamt open eyed absorbed from ceiling and fingertips can make this up. No amount of instruments, of cellos and perspex...
Well deserved nice feedback! This was bubbly and fun and nasty at the same time. I can feel the frustration even though you sugar-coat it well.
This one wasn't random!! I really enjoyed - it made me smile, and was clever with its wordplay.
bit of both. start maybe with a line or image i want to use and play around with it. Very rarely just write in one go though - I rearrange and...
That was really great - a sense of urbanity, loss, waiting and despondency.
I like this whole piece a lot. "A disease that can be cured with hard work and coffee" - sure.
first four lines are superb, I agree.
Where shall we go then? Is there a place in our here and now where we can joust in happy denial? Those gossips! Ha! Such a bore, but usually...
simple and very cool (excuse the pun)
This is a neat collection Fulmah. So vibrant and playful, but each has it's darker moments. Atmospheric tapestry. Love em all but I think "Sloppy...
This is a bitter chuckle, this flirtation with exotic words so quick to lick this bleached and whoring page to flicker on and off like the...
I am no siren, yet you are so easily beguiled, bewitched, by incantations in a minor key, these trivial posies of words, hard won, wrought...
This was very cool, esp the opening two lines. Like it.
I'll have a desktop full of memories. I want bent photos, with a seam running across one corner curling slightly, like the lips on the image, the...
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