Also, staying on topic, Zorba the new poems are great! I would also love to read some of your regular poetry, as well. And my new phrase is: A...
Thanks a lot, man!! That means a lot, especially since your work inspired me to give it a go. I'm glad you liked it! :D And I'm sorry about the...
Thanks QP!!! Not to take away from Zorba, at all, but I just wanted to share that. I liked it. :) And yes, my sig quote is the name of Bukowski...
You're absolutely welcome, sugarplum. And let me just say that, first of all, yes. Poetry is extremely therapeutic, and amazing for helping us...
Thank you, TD!! I'm glad you get the same feeling from it that caused me to write it in the first place. :) I miss the open road, and travelling...
Haha, wonderful! Picturing it was hilarious. I hope you don't mind, but you inspired me to do a little of the same kind of work, and I thought...
Just wanted to bump this, maybe get it a little attention.
If it weren't for the fact that Rambleon has been here for years, I'd swear he/she was a troll. I am very sorry for your loss, sugarplum, and I...
Well, I like it. I think you did as you yourself described in the end of the poem. You have hollowed out a home for yourself, yet WITHIN a work of...
Rambleon, I'm sorry, but do you have anything positive to say about anyone's poetry? I've done a little snooping around the poetry forum here, and...
The feeling would be a night time adventure through the downtown of your hometown, years after moving away. The message, if there is a clear one...
Thanks, man! I really appreciate that, and coming from a great writer such as yourself, it means a lot. Yes, I do understand. This poem has a...
Just written now. Based on a friend's photo album. The hanging lights of orange under sky, yet above me, sings. Peeking around a corner, whisping...
Very nice flow, and the imagery is very sensual, too. I like it.
I'm going to have to disagree with Rambleon on this. Don't stray from topics just because they're cliched. The reason they're cliched is because...
I appreciate the constructive criticism, but not the tone. Please, I ain't no kiddo. Never texted before, either. Thanks though!
My earthworn teeth laugh at the thought of elbow sandwiches, and I sip my beer again. I flick a page over, think hard on how great poetry was...
Dude, what happened to the poem? It disappeared!
Fuck, way too awesome. Being high didn't hinder your talent at all, man, that was gold. Can I offer another? "Thrift store church organ."
I, ugh, tend to rhyme a lot sometimes. Ha. This one is about my many on the road adventures, and how much I miss them. lost old bag of bones, i...
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