Nevermind, I understand now
Thanks a lot for your advice, Ramble. I truly appreciate it.
Ramb, Do you mean that I should take it and shove it, or use it in a more focused way? ( : Ocean
Usually it's like I go into a day dream, and see all these pictures and situations. Lately I've been in that good mood where I feel like 'I'm...
Bret Easton Ellis is an interesting writer. He's kind of whiny at times, but as far as story line, and psychologically good...
I really enjoyed "All Too Human: A Political Education" by George stephanopoulos
Cool. I hope you write poetry
"like the leaves when the summer dies"
When I said "yee" I meant that I like it. However I think that the last line of this poem should be "the imaginary being", unless you were already...
Trying to record my thoughts and emotions often ends in cognitive dissonance, and picture reels, kind of like watching a film in fast forward and...
(I wrote this in a matter of a few seconds. It's very short. I couldn't sleep, and that first line kept showing up in my thoughts. I got up and...
No,go ahead if you'd like. I appreciate constructive criticism. I just thought that was the point of Free writing, uninhibiting yourself, not...
Thanks for your input
This poem fucking blows
(What I did here was an attempt at free writing. I simply wrote whatever came to mind, until i didn't feel like writing anymore. Hope you enjoy.....
DUde I like it. It sort of reminds me of "stan" by Eminem, but so far after reading "young pussy" I can tell that you're into hip hop so i'm...
I love this. You're words are beautiful
yee
Well written April
Do you ever get lost when you're driving in the dark? headlights caressing giving their blessing streetlights matching Do you ever get lost...
Separate names with a comma.
