your welcome sweetheart.
this is sweet.
beautiful :)
i like the title..."forget being fixed" lol but thats my suggestion. i really like this poem...you know it hit a soft spot with me. im guessing...
jacobxross: wat is ur problem? poopzilla is just trying to help you better your poem...thats wat this forum is mainly about posting your poems...
poopzilla: thanks i appriciate your suggestion jacobxross: how so?
read it again and then apply to mean something to you...
^thanks
bump all comments and critisism welcome.
recently ive been hurting a lot of people and i just want to appologize publicly to the few who are on here....its my first rhyming poem in awhile...
my aunt had a miscarriage about two years ago and the whole family went through a tough time. tho you may not see it now, it could be a blessing...
i decided to skim the "forgotten" poems of the second page...im glad i did after reading ur poem
this was beautiful. it made me smile as well that you realize that letting go for good is the best. :)
pretty good. :)
The truth shed through broken glass The truth finally comes out, your hopes and wantings of me are finally said. I know without a doubt that...
i like this one good work. keep writing.
we could collaborate if you want...pm me all you have and ill give you some ideas. if you want
lol yea we do
i dont really care.mine are big.got back problems cause they are so big. they are natural so dont get it twisted like i got a induction. people...
Squirrels fucking in the tree.
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