not sure about the title for this one...if you have any suggestions let me know mess My hands are stained with emotion. My head is cluttered...
ALL COMMENTS AND CRITIQUES WELCOMED. to be invisible I walk with my head down, ashamed to be seen; waiting to get back to the small place of...
i liked it a lot. :)
simple and beautiful.
im hypersensitive. but i think that you may have just felt what she was feeling because of experiencing the pain of a break up. it seems her hurt...
beautiful :) may peace and love find you Amber
all are extremely beautiful.
i remember reading this but i dont know why i didnt comment it. great job yet again hun. i love reading your stuff so keep it coming.
kind of had a happy feeling in the beginning and then as it went on got melancholy. I sensed a feeling of hurt and loss in it...maybe a lost love...
beautiful. :) keep writing. i look forward to see more from you. may peace and love find you Amber
mrcoolguy i plan to.
thank you. yes expressing love can be quite difficult...ive personally never written much about love but this one came quite easily
i liked it :) it shows that you've exprienced pain and choais causing you to be paranoid and panic most days...and as life goes on and the...
sounds like a vision of a rainy day in a crowded city...surrounded by many umbrellas protecting people from the frigid rain. this could have a...
this definately hit a soft spot for me...and i felt like i could relate to it for the most part. very deep and well written. id love to read more...
expresses mortals mystery in the ways of the world and not knowing whats in store extremely well. may peace and love find you Amber
...breath taking. I agree with arthippie you have a style that is abstract and not everyone can understand it. Id enjoy reading more from you,...
^ thanks. may peace and love find you.
all comments and critisism welcomed. OUR CHANCE Our chance for greatness is upon us, staring us in the face telling of the...
i think this is beautiful. I LOVE YOU MORE THAN HE DOES! dont forget that. :)
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