i think it was supposed to be a dialect where a woman who could hardly speak english was talking...that could be why it makes little sense.
they are both so beautiful. "I hurt" has to be my favorite I can just really relate to it.
simple and sweet.
its sweet. i like this one.
wow...this is amazing. :) breath-taking even.
wow...great.
thanks :)
very beautiful.
"unanswered questions remain a mystery in time" i love that. good job keep writing i look forward to more from you. May peace and love find...
simply beautiful :)
^thanks.
here are two more new poem...ive broken my writers block :). well all comments and critiques are welcomed. A GOOD CHANGE I let my content...
very good for one of your firsts...my advice keep at it you could become really good. may peace and love find you Amber
very beautiful. may peace and love find you Amber
^thanks to all. I LOVE YOU FMC! :)
queen was amazing...i liked the other two as well but that has to be my favorite of the three. keep writing i enjoyed reading your work....
i am a very depressing person so ive been told...i have written a few happy peices lately but even they seem to carry a dark side...i dont know...
they are beautiful. you captured the emotions very well
selfish ways of my mortality everyday someone dies, everyday someone suffers, everyday someone else looses their mind... every second someone...
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