very enlightning, i like the part about the energy growing it is very encouraging to think that the eneryg is growing stronger, i am very into...
that is a very awesome display of word power, it is so right on! peace love and groovy colors
you know a lot of times people are scared of poems like this and they get the wrong idea, poems are a very theraputic way of dealing with emotions...
don't ever give up on that dream, i swear dragon, im right there with you man and i can feel it more every day that we as a unity of people are...
definately the way it is, it is such an emotional rollercoaster, thats why some of my poetry is so dark, its not always that i mad its more like i...
man you guys are making me blush, this is so much fun sharing with each other, it is so encouraging reading everyones poetry and reaction to my...
i tell you my friend, the answer to your poem is in your poem, and that is you, keep spreading your wings friend and fly the message of love all...
yeah right on! i am on the cusp of leo virgo 8-23 79, i am being pulled constantly from the affection of leo to the perfection of virgo and its...
i love that picture with the little baby feet, oh if my kids where still that young i miss those days.
spread your wings and fly fly up high into the sky leave yourself behind
it just has to dragon or else we are all doomed to a life of.... i don't even like to think about it love to the world man
i wasn't so much angry as i was tierd and frustrated. i get so wore out sometimes but i love my life and i have no regrets and i will not...
they use to be, well they still are but im past that now, i just wanted to show the lighter more romantic side of myself, im not a totally dark...
man i just read this poem again and i absolutely love it man! it is such a well put well constructed and organized thought and expression of...
i wrote that a year and a half ago right after my dad died and at the time my head might as well been full of lead it was full of everything else...
that's one thing about my writing, i dont hold back no matter how it may come back, i am shy by nature but when i write its just me and the paper...
to me that is the whole point of poetry, capturing the moment, it is so encouraging that i am able to capture it so clearly for others, its...
very nice! i like the rhym schem, you have a very powerful way with words, my best advice is to keep writing and explore different styles and...
that is a brilliant piece of work, it is right on the wave length of my mind, what is a neptunian though? i know it astrological, but what exactly...
some fellow irishmen and women, ive never been but my ancestors are irish, i do hope to visit there someday, let me rephrase, i will visit there...
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