Ok, I polished it up a little... well, actually, I changed the whole story. That's what I do a lot when I'm trying to polish things up, but...
God, i reread this, and it sucks (sorry, i just hate my writiing)
Edgar Allan Poe is a great poet, but I dont think he'd be the best for a beginner. Emily Dickinson is a pretty decent poet too, i like a lot of...
no, i still like it. i dont really care if it's shitty, life is shitty in general, so naturally everything is shitty. I still like the poem.
It's ok. I liked it till the last few lines, work on it a little more.
I hate this poem, but I'm posting it anyways. Flowers Flowers are blooming… Their petals are just opening To breath fresh air. At night,...
Tattoos You pull the razor against my arm… It drags, the blade cutting deeper and deeper into my skin. I am scarred… Blood seeps out...
great poetry
this is... interesting
yah, i suppose i agree with that
I personally like this a lot. It's really a different perspecitive of the world, I never really thought of the world like that except when I think...
I just wrote this out of boredom, nothing else. I personally think it's corny, but here it is. You can read it if you want, this post is all I...
It's a good poem, but I generally don't like the topic. Most of our world is a terrible place. I didn't like the last 2 lines either, sounded to...
I'm glad you don't think it's corny:D . When I wrote this I was confused with life and so I just wrote something down. This is what it turned up...
this is brilliant! very powerful!
What is Love? Why do o' so many people, talk, gossip, think about love? What is it.. What is love? It is when you cuddle on the couch, in the...
Thanks guys!
hm, maybe it was just what i call a 'maddness' dream. In which your mind is confused...
are you feeling like you're in a situation where there is no escape? maybe with your boyfriend?
You are a talented writer
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