I loved the third and fourth stanzas, and the line 'A golden skin lay on the lake'. I liked this overall, it almost reminded me of a place I...
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Wow! Keramptha, you speak the truth...everything inspired is indeed made from a combination of things. I like the way you write, and I like...
Devon, I remember you! You were brilliant...and now I have read something I presume to be current, you're still just as lovely a poet as ever!...
Oh, and about the 'season' thing...could you not flaunt the rules a bit? Instead of 'season' in relation to nature and time of year and all...
Wow, Bhaskar! You fell in love with a carnivore; you bastard! Only joking ;) Hope your intended reader realises how lucky they are, I know...
Yes, I too am a fallen Princess. I wish I could be a Princess again...maybe someday. I want to be taken for a ride on the back of a magical...
Wow, it sounds like he's had it really tough. I don't believe his childhood is an excuse for the way he behaves as an adult, but then how can I...
You write like I think. Is that a compliment? Don't know! *smiles* X
Don't wait for him, don't be there. Don't ever let him think he's got you...if he wanted you, he would be with you and you wouldn't have to live...
Poets hide under rocks? I thought that was toads. And I'M not a toad...I'm a Princess :) Bhaskar, will you be my Prince? *blushes*
Actually that's stupid. Okay, us, and all published poets. That's more like it!
Maybe we're the only poets in the whole world to exist...ooh, spooky ;)
Bhaskar, your home sounds almost as delicious as you! My university is actually a little like you describe, it is a beautiful place and a very...
People do that? Hell no, on the 14th I shall be dressing as a giant red velvet heart and frequenting a local club of mine, trying to persuade...
Thank you! I was trying to complete a crossword before coming online, and I needed a word for 'American state, four letters' beginning in...
I wouldn't say I am unduly bitter about Valentine's Day...however I love and am loved, in so many of it (love's) variations, and like all people I...
Mxymotosis is a disease that rabbits get...and rabbits also get a lot of sex, presumably...I mean, the phrase 'at it like rabbits' would suggest so!
I find this poem very sad...the tone seems rather upbeat, the light little rhyme skips along deceptively...but still, so sad. I want to cry now!...
Love the last seven lines, they have that same quality I used to recognise in your work, something which makes me wonder of the inspiration behind...
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