Wow, Ripple...i liked the last poem the best (I assume they are two separate poems) it feels good to be back here :)
So...what is it! I know this sounds like a bit of an oddball question, but the other day a bloke went down on me, he was giving me oral sex when...
'It speaks in tones of a tambourine gently kissing your ear' I love that :)
This is lovely, I especially like the first few lines, about his lips purple as the eraser at the end of the pencil that wrote his life...it was...
Oh Bhaskar I am sorry for your sadness, and sorrier still that it takes such sadness to cause very beautiful thoughts, and poetry, to flow :(...
He's not joking, Eternal...he really is that special :) As for the poem, I was sure I had posted to tell you how brilliant this was...I will...
Hah! Androidette, well done for bringing that up! LilyLove, the actual spelling of 'Se La Vi' is 'C'est La Vie' which is French and which...
I really really like this! It does what I feel all good poems should do...it opens up and swallows you so you can see right inside someone else's...
If I could eat the World, I would easily spare The chicken I crave * The strong animal Within, wriggles her claws deep in My gut; famished * Hear...
NOT A HAIKU! Carnivorous as It might seem, Bhaskar; still I would happily Eat your heart For the goodness it contains
What you have said has been said before, many times, but still you convey the cliche beautifully. I would expect nothing less from you, Bhakar XxHxX
I liked this...it seems coy to me, not sad, and certainly the implication is sex, whether literal or through the eyes. As an additional thought,...
Is it possible to fall in love with three lines, albeit instantaneously? X
Lovely as ever...I'm not usually fond of rhyming poetry, but this was a delicious exception. If the words in your poem were meant to convey...
I clearly am not reading enough of your work, as I once did, because I couldn't find you in this piece...not without noting your name attached....
Bhaskar I know you Are still in my heart, but are You still around here?
I agree. It should be enough to say you love, without feeling the need to add reasons or explanations. But I am not averse to people saying...
Mmm...delicious, Apple!
I think what you're doing is brilliant...damn I wish someone had done this for me when I was born, so that when I was older I could read all the...
Wow! Sorry, that's not a very substantial answer...can I come back to you when I've had time to digest every little piece your massive talent? X
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