man, youre just groovin to one fashion and not another. its all but i kinda like the first three verses.
hmmm that's cool i like verses these days but not in that poem but i dont think you ould actually write it any differently
yeah... i think that's crap :)
but i sweeeeeeeeeeeeeear dot and snot so do not rhyme with twat!!!! youre funny spyder man...and youre welsh!!!! wooooooo
that's pretty cool. it's ok to fall :)
that poem reminds me of my lovely rainbow jumper :) no not the kind youre all thinking about....it's not garish it's bootiful centering your...
yay! xxxxxx
hmmmmmm numbers..... i never use them but a concept...nice and distanced and impersonal and ....woooo i dont have a real title let your mind soar...
*nodding* :) that's kinda cool cos it kinda could be placed anywhere in the western world...universal (the universe being the 20% of this...
belch .....
hey. wow that's a lot of work youve done there. a few things... i think you need to do a bit more combing....some incorrect spelling, punctuation...
:D the charm of that absolutely ROCKS xxx
hmph yeah well that's groovy and you staple your ideas to the brains of your readers but i dont think your ideas have any real weight to them man...
i think only you can name your poems and if you cant then so be it. i never title my poems on anything but impulse :)
that's really good. you place your narator well :)
hellow dude. i read it. i ignored the fact that you based your writing on a video game to begin with however reading through it it felt more and...
haha really inspiring...got me thinking
hmph.....thanx for sharing your random though but man i feel completely different. i mean i have had a writers block for a while....but jesus...
jesus, that rocks! :) fanx fer sharing brother or sister
hmmmmm......well, sometimes i wish i was more gulliable.
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