Thanks. Oh and tell the kids not to be too mean to Susy-talks-alot...:)
I liked what you had to say. They are important, and often overlooked facts.
Thank you both.
"Baloola-I am tired of your dancing. Your dirty coat and it's dull sheen, Never reproved for the things you mean. You flash your grin like wet...
I held my breath as I watched you wander that dream world desert sifting gold from tawny sand, swirling your fluent hand through the eddies made...
Nice mirroring effect. The first stanza is alot of fun.
"but there is a stone suspended by an unseen force sphereical, quadrantized, tertiary, pentagramic geodisic heart approximate perfection, precise...
"I'll watch it dance in green and gold Then I'll catch it when it slows" Your words could almost be a song. :)
Beautiful, delicate images.
"and here in heat mirage, the tiniest smile she concedes evaporates, vaporizes and rises up, where coalescing tendrils bead." :) I'm in some...
I did as you suggested and chopped off the loitering last line. You were right, it definetley feels more obscure and open now. Thanks, and enjoy...
I gave the faded luster three kisses for buena suerte, and retreating sway down dark lanes refrained from my reaching fingertips. So lips are...
Amazing what comes out when you're on perscription drugs. :) Thank you all.
I love the way you wrote this, very elegant, and tragic as well.
It is good to lose the frivility of speech within the silence of contemplation. Dream always
A perfect fractal of chaotic design, a desire for time's sweet and languid nectar and wings gently coating breezes with the honey of mutual...
*Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you!* See you under those stars.
YES!!! How could you possibly imagine that would offend anyone? Ok, we think in a similar way, but I LOVED IT! The last four stanzas are my...
Shadows turn black eyes to blacker onyx. This is the breath we share coupled with smoke and cinnamon spirals of honey soaked skin. You are...
"Verdant sloping contours while young, resembling a perfect sphere; when mature, an ancient matriarch endowed with pendulous multiple curves." I...
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