Wow! This is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. Your style is exquisite, expression concise and elegant. I loved it!
I was in Cusco, Peru for christmas, and the scene there is what inspired this poem. South America is so vivid, I love it!
Yeah, there are a couple of my threads up there right now. Let me know what you think.
La Plaza de Aremas pulsates with the residue of a pacifist Hiroshima. Christmas is a craze of raucous children in holey t-shirts and short...
Very provacative. I like it.
Beautiful and sweet. I got a very different feeling as I read the poem. Almost as if the first two stanzas could be a separate piece from the...
Wow. I'm glad (and a little surprised) that you all like it. Thank you.
Thank you for your insightful critique. It is always helpful to have the opinions of others.
Out of the ginger a small stem peered, brushing the light from its eyes and swelling with the flux of one long breath. Yesterday the cardinals...
Wonderful! (And finally something without a forced rhyme scheme)
Thanks Pheonix. Sylvan you can find all kinds of symbols in Microsoft Word. Just click Insert -> symbol and browse to your hearts content. Any...
In the last world, where the sky is so many browns, and the skating wind barely settles into the loam-- deep and dank in lost detritus and bone,...
You have a lovely sense of rhythm and rhyme.
Thanks for the comments everyone. I'll try to write something new now and again ;)
Through the dry days of January, when the wind whistled sullenly southward and caught its tongue on the frosty lamposts of silvered trees, I sat....
Wow... If I ever come to the Uk can we hang out?
Shafted sunlight sifts and trembles like rock shuddering in fever or orgasm and shaking as cold washes her tenderly and mortality combs her hair...
Nice one. "like that evil kitchen air that fogs window, blackens bananas, " Truly a beautiful image.
Bolivian rain flooding the gutters with urgent ennui, muddy brown flower petals that tumble somersaults in a chaotic trance to the curb where they...
Yeah, I had this revelation (perhaps misguided) oneday, due to a tiny reflection of light on a plastic bottle that light is more darkness than...
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