It was alright, some good words but doesn't flow verry well.
terripin flyer let you know how it's done. good mind fuck though!
So i somehow stubbeled upon this site and imediatly feel in love. Any conversation you could possibly want to coerse yourself in is waiting to...
I agree with you. Especially considering some of the topics discussed on this type of forum. I could not hide who i am just because i am on the...
Your hilarious...and I like long hair because it shows that he doesn't care about how he looks...yet i agree with what you said about the rebel...
After high school i'm going to go to a liberal arts college and study anthropology/ sociology and journalism. Go to graduate school...hopefully....
i personnally love this poem. It is one emotion, one experience and it holds this fantastically worded message. Nothing. Write onward, through...
the two lines that rhymed spice this poem up oober amounts. I like it.
i personally haven't read any poetry such as yourself writes. It is about eveyday life, everyday actions,and it seems to me how repetitive life...
I love the way you don't use puncuation yet still capitalize words. This poem is full of solemn, and uncontrollable anguish. I love it.
As I walk into their flabbergasting forest The trees loom overhead, Entrancing me with their erratic dance. I am driven to forge By the...
Your imagery creates quite a platform for your poetry, if that's your style we have something in common, we have something in common indeed
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