The length of Carly’s May-mud color hair, her double chin, the breadth of her shoulders, the curve of her breasts and her hips quickened John’s...
there are thousands of writing exercises out there that can get the ideas flowing. check out a writing book from the library (any "craft" book by...
clinging to sky that's letting go... the bottom is always falling out... crushed by gravity, deadlines, bills...
well there are always times where this will fall short, as our language is a poor conductor of true creativity, but the tangible is the most...
i never think anything i write is good. that's not the point though, the point is you keep writing even when you're not sure if its good, and...
Meth Heads in My Living Room Their eyes jitterbugged around their heads, following a soundless two-step across living room walls smoke stained...
you are a breath of fresh air in here right now! i like your style, all your pieces flow so well...
you know, i've read this like three times now, and i just "got" it. i'm a little dense. anyway, i like this too now that i get it. it's really...
very good. i liked this one a lot. you have an awesome cadence here and i really like how you've played with words without getting too abstract...
i liked this. it's a bit off kilter, but that works. i would cut the lines "it's that void/keeps you sane," they dont really do much for the...
hmm...interesting! i dont really know what to make of this, but i like it. the first two lines are the best. i dont much like the word "perfect"...
i'll second that
I am he as you are he as you are me and we are all together...
how i feel about my homework right now: 1500 Words There are supposed to be 1500 words in my head on Victorian Poetry, Elizabeth Barrett...
well i was gonna post a fiction piece i wrote, but it wont let me copy and paste and keep the format so...i'll post it when i have the time to...
Twisted Her palms are raw where clenched fingers squish plastic nails into grated skin pocked like footholds on a cliff face with...
haha...ok, sounds good, dont read that one too close though, as the edited version is better! I almost have it done!
wow...this all hits too close to home right now, you really have no idea!
haunting and chilly...very nice. very tight imagery
hi cherry, can i offer you my thoughts? as far as "senseless cyclone" goes, i would try to think of a more concrete way to say it, or maybe just...
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