beautiful cosmic dream!!
same here; great title and first three lines, and if this comes out of rustyness(<<<-- is that a legal word?) i am curious what comes out when the...
Thou the One I Love O Thou, embracing Silence seized by Your Love I expand in the void, while staring in Your eyes....
skyfire beautiful writings especialy the poem 'inspiration'. looking forward to see more colors of you.
well, give up the illusion and let the fear escape to experience your Self as Being the sea my dear!
'hunger' exposed. are you rescue'd yet? :)
My English is unfortunalty too poor to make any refining comment. Though i would like to mention that i like 'Wasteland' of it's dramastic...
keep writing, posting B-meanie, nice to read. about your poem; i would leave the word - And - out.
thank you bh.bitch :) I I - climb trees play hide-and-seek with the stars fly with the eagles dance with the wind sing with the...
you get what you deserve, congratulations! would you like to share the piece of art with us?
angels in disguise once again I see myself, sitting here right in front of you i'm sorry to be not the one you want me to, will I ever be?...
@skyfire not sad just a misunderstanding, no-one to blame [IMG]
i'm getting greedy i suppose! when will i fall and leave this world without a single trace to loose myself in empty space no more time to cover...
magnificent, beautiful expression of a deep experience. laughing tears, joyful pain the big contrast of the 'open door'.
thank you! and A. you're right i will feel about how to change the 4th line.
nowhere to hide from this illusion the emptyness scares me inside i builded my own world around through the creation of thoughts i pretend to...
Life is Great Fun!!
and illusions with you.
Illusion I Am an illusion made by pure confusion never will I be the one you think to see
@usfcat Thank you! I'm from the north part of Holland called Fryslan, maybe you've heard of it? That part of the Netherlands has there own...
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