You should read "Shame", by Salmon Rushdie. I'm reading it right now, and it's very good. I just read a part that has simalar themes to the ones...
I likes, but one question, is the speaker dancing for "you", or drinking for "you", or both?
Cheers! I wrote two versions of it, one with a few extra versions, and would like your opinion. Unfortunately I don't feel quite like this...
Yeah. Looks like a scam to me.
I didn't like it all, but I did like it alot.
Love Poem to my Existence in this World I love you! You know that. I want to dance and spin around And have sunshine and rain cascade down onto...
I'm not sure what I think of it. I like it in a way, but it seems rather vague. I can't grasp hold of it properly. The line "the hidden begin to...
I wish you a willing heart And an easy temper. I wish you constancy And understanding. I wish you within And without; May you live long and May...
Overall, I like it. I like the images, and the simple choice of words, and I like that you are both writing feelings and places, which is unusual...
Love Poem from the Outside to You In the summer you resolved to love me, But when winter came You slipped inside with the cold. See how I still...
I don't want to repeat all of what Vetty said, but "poke" is really out of place. It seems very clumsy amoung the other words you used. As...
What is it you got? (I was refering to a different haiku. Plus - trying not to sound petty - I think we know what a standard haiku is)
Rhyming! Behind cloudy eyes My weary mind stirs and tries To shrug off the lies
Oooo, a rhyming haiku. I've never seen one of those before. Not that I remember.
:D I've done that with limericks to try not to think about the present.
Nobody? Rereading this makes me think that the title isn't right, even when tacked onto the end.
Hmmm... I don't think I like "Journey", because it's more the leaving and the returning that was important to me when I wrote it.
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I'm scared of life, but in an excited way. Death is not an issue.
I read In The Night Kitchen and know that somewhere there's a giant bottle of milk into which small boys dive weilding milk jugs and clad in soon...
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