You're Scrathing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jay_hasBeauty, Jun 28, 2012.

  1. Jay_hasBeauty

    Jay_hasBeauty Member

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    You flaunt like you're perfect.

    I see your secrets through your evil little eyes.

    Your hunger is of youth.

    And you're a monster.
    and you can't hide.

    .. Soon you're secret
    will reveal itself in time.

    But flaunt like your perfect.

    Like you've never touched one soul.

    But your itch that's a problem..
    It's starting to show.

    Be scared .
    Be aware .

    'Cause I know..

    Originally done here: http://www.poetry.com/poems/286239
     
  2. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    i like it. welldone jay.its deep. that poems got soul!:2thumbsup:
     
  3. Jay_hasBeauty

    Jay_hasBeauty Member

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    Lol , thanks! :afro:
     
  4. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    your welcome jay. keep writing!:)
     
  5. Jay_hasBeauty

    Jay_hasBeauty Member

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    I will :)
    It's my outlet..
     
  6. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    thats a very positive outlet jay.:2thumbsup:
     
  7. Jay_hasBeauty

    Jay_hasBeauty Member

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    Hahaha , yea ..:)
    At first I use to just write my thoughts in a journal ..
    then one day I just shifted it into poetry .
    It cleared my mind better than just plain writing.
     
  8. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    writing a journal is a great outlet to jay.but i get how your poetry clears your mind better.cos poetry is so freeflowing.your poety is a gift to you and for others who read it.nite jay.sweetdreams kid:grouphug::mickey: x
     
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    thanks for sharing..
     
  10. Aerianne

    Aerianne Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Nice, Jay!
     
  11. Jay_hasBeauty

    Jay_hasBeauty Member

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    Thanks & lol .. goodnite:sleeping:
     
  12. Jay_hasBeauty

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    Thanks.:afro:
     
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