writers?

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  1. natural philosophy

    natural philosophy bitchass sexual chocolate

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    ya i know there's a writer's forum but it's dead. i want to know if there are any writers/poets in the hizzouse?

    im currently co-authoring a book with a friend of mine who has published two books before, so the likelyhood of getting published (in a full book at least...i've been published in a few magazines but nothing big). im also writing on a few side projects. hoping to have it finished by next summer.

    if you are a writer, dont be shy- post some of your work. i'd like to read it.:cheers2:
     
  2. LittleRaisin

    LittleRaisin Member

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    Hello there, here's a compilation of a few different poems that I have saved on my PC.

    Oranges peaches lemon colored sands
    sunshine glistens on the water that stands
    it hears your thoughts everything you say
    whether you mumble it or yell it loud as day

    even angels sometimes they think
    about lifes comparison to a shiny roller rink
    every leeching palm fishes to get closer to the rainbow colored fishes

    surrounding my eyes
    surrounding my ears
    did i just taste that D chord?
    or was schizophrenia just getting a little bored?

    I call this next one Synthetic Theoretic.

    I am one as
    we are three
    peaceful at night
    so blatant to see
    the illuminating energy
    thats beaming from me
    blind to the unseen eye
    try to find
    for the possibilitys are endless
    the future is visible
    the drums beat uncorded and divisible
    but now there is no other pleace for me
    for we can be where we cannot sea
     
  3. Diton

    Diton Banned

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    Closest I have is various lyrics I've written. I was playing around with different styles when I wrote these, so they're all supposed to be different styles. glass coffin is a cannibal corpse type song, the end of sanity is more of a standard rock/nu metal type song, and under the electric lights tells more of a story so i see it being probably a prog metal type song.

    glass coffin:
    Chorus:
    Decaying remains
    Rotting for all to see
    On display in a
    Glass Coffin

    There is little left of the face.
    A few features that used to be:
    A piece of bone, maybe a nose.
    A flap of skin dangling,
    Exposing the maggot infested,
    Cavernous depths of the mouth.
    Pink ooze flowing out of the fragmented skull.

    Chorus:
    Decaying remains
    Rotting for all to see
    On display in a
    Glass Coffin

    The torso a bloody mess,
    Breeding ground for insects Making a meal of the organs:
    Stomach, Liver, Kidneys,
    All ravaged by the feast within.

    Chorus:
    Decaying remains
    Rotting for all to see
    On display in a
    Glass Coffin

    How easily we forget
    What death truly is,
    Hidden from us by our attempts to sanitize it.
    Embalming, preservation of the corpse,
    All to protect us from the truth.

    Chorus:
    Decaying remains
    Rotting for all to see
    On display in a
    Glass Coffin

    The End of Sanity:
    (Spoken)
    There is a battle going on every day
    It never stops, and it's never won
    We're spiraling into the abyss in the struggle
    to preserve life as we know it.

    (Song Starts)
    Our way of life is dying
    Violence is taking control
    Power is consolidated and poverty spreads
    Crime takes over
    And war is on the horizon
    An ever present threat

    (Chorus)
    This is the end of sanity
    The beginning of an Age of Brutality
    And the end of humanity

    The world will never be the same again
    After it all comes to an end
    When the future is worse than the past
    The question must be asked:
    Why do I need to be here?
    I'll make my escape now
    Rather than die in the shamed wreckage of today

    Chorus

    This is the end of sanity
    This is the end of everything
    It's over
    Say goodbye

    under the electric lights:
    Standing on the sidewalk,
    Waiting to hitch a ride.
    Nothing in sight,
    All dark but the harsh glow of the electric lights.
    Headlights approaching,
    A moment's hesitation,
    But the need to know for sure is too much to bear.
    Just one step,
    The sound of metal and bone cleaving,
    Shattering glass.
    The last thing I see is car and tree
    melded into one being

    As my life flashes before my eyes,
    I see my childhood,
    pushed into some forgotten corner of memory:
    first day of school,
    first fuck,
    all firsts leading to this last.

    I look down and see myself in a hospital bed,
    Shrouded in healing white light,
    Surrounded by friends,
    family.

    It is only an illusion.
    I lie,
    waiting,
    bleeding my soul out on the pavement
    under the electric lights.
     
  4. dreadedsunflower

    dreadedsunflower Senior Member

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    I use to write free-verse poems but most of them are pretty horrid in my opinion but I'll share some of my poems I like they have alittle bit of a rhyme but all my teachers told me they were free-verse so idk

    Butterflies:
    By-Mary Dockery-Pogue
    11:05pm
    thursday
    aug/11/05

    Butterflies flutter by on a sunny day
    As I watch from my cage
    They are so pure in their life
    As I am so sinister in mine
    Butterflies
    Mother Nature's Angels
    Me
    Mother Nature's Demon
    For I am a human who does not care
    Mother Nature cares not what is done to her
    But what is done to her children
    I have captured a butterfly
    In hopes one day I will be in its place
    as it flutters by on a sunny day

    Birthday
    By-Mary Dockery-Pogue
    Nov/9/05
    -no clock-
    Wednesday

    Birthday

    Her birthday is coming
    The day she'll be 15
    The day she is suppose to be happy
    But what if she's not
    Will the world stop turning
    Will the world ever care
    Will it be hard for anyone to notice
    She'll smile and pretend to be happy
    Because this day only comes one a year
    She's scared her friends will forget
    She's scared her lover won't care
    She will love herself on that one day
    She's not going to let them get to her
    She'll love herself on the inside if not on the out...

    these are the only two I could stomach to post(might be able to find some more I like) because I'm so afraid of people reading what I've written
     
  5. daisymelan

    daisymelan Professional fence sitter

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    I am a writer, but I write for work/business purposes. Constantly writing articles, blog posts and designing adcopy/webcopy for my websites. I never thought I would be writing so much as a profession, but I really do enjoy it. I cant compete with the poetry and stories I have read in this forum already, but just wanted to share that I too craft words. :)
     
  6. HushBull

    HushBull Insuperior

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    THIS I$ AMERICA
    The unknown street understood by the lowliest criminal and exploited by the most savvy business man.
    The rolling grain hills that beget our fiendish appetite.
    The fuel we give to our placated future.
    Our once had, but which soon left.
    Our forever towering structure waning in the wind.
    New elements infused delaying freefall.
    Understandable passing as understood.
    Revolts and reverts.
    Undertow in the calming tide.
    The shining lights being our North Star.
    Scorning of tradition in favor of revolution.
    Lashing tongues at encroaching evil while doing little to suppress our own.
    Ever-sinking growth.
    Torpedoes of faith and awestruck onlookers finding the path to the end.
    Weaving industrial into a merriment with what is natural.
    Our uncontrollable and unforgiving destiny in a Petri dish.
    A cataclysm of times.
    The ordaining of cubic-spheres and the whitewash of our fabrics.
    Honesty being moot and mundane.
    Realizations and visualizations.
    Twist the unkempt and corner the weary.
    Pacify the challengers and keep at bay the truth.
    Amass the ranks for they will soon be depleted.
    Scouring the bottom for the remnants of the strong.
    A puzzle of shambles set in melting adhesive.
    An alloy of the unidentified.
    The wants of hope slipping.
    Our vices becoming our victories, upstaging preemptive moral.
    Fate beckons to little resistance.
    Hesitation due to doubtfulness.
    Giving way to only phases of the moon.
    Rigor in the face of the unforeseen.
    Rectify chosen idols and silence the collective.
    Dog your values and howl.
     
  7. HushBull

    HushBull Insuperior

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    Treat one as they are, forget not- human, yes
    Disposable for more, kept close for warmth
    Cascaded feelings flowing into a more bountiful body, diffused-diluted
    Prized and a blunder, I am one as you are each others
    Segmented and withering- acknowledged and pilfering, waiting for the cliff to lean- fall
    Touted dismay within, a confident sulk
    Gravitate to hallowed truths, forget others which pain
    Caution gifts for they will be lost, soiled, trampled, turned
    Neutralize with the earth, it is sustenance- it is lasting
    Congregate your base, cover the faults- step
    Goad faithfulness- pelt fearfulness- tromp the night
    Feel and breathe- return home
    Spill and heave hurt- rise, see- cradle your stone, lay beneath and shed
    Internalize-grow
     
  8. Domikatetrix

    Domikatetrix if your naaaaaaaaaaasty

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    just one of my favorite free verse poems ive writtten and i had to do a picture becuase i cant type it the write way on here
     
  9. shadygrov

    shadygrov Member

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    LOL!!! you can't type it either. :cheers2:
     
  10. Domikatetrix

    Domikatetrix if your naaaaaaaaaaasty

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    maybe i did that on purpose ;) a cute little writers pun
     
  11. shadygrov

    shadygrov Member

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    I do all my writing on line less paper in a sketch book. I find it keeps things more open and unofficial...the way I like.

    I have load of songs but I am not posting them. It's pointless without melody.
     
  12. HushBull

    HushBull Insuperior

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    :)
     
  13. shadygrov

    shadygrov Member

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    very true
     
  14. Domikatetrix

    Domikatetrix if your naaaaaaaaaaasty

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    i write lotta music hard to tell when u cant hear it reading musi/lyrics isnt the same
     
  15. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    I write music mostly now but I used to write a lot of poetry and a few shorts. I'm working on a book right now, a dystopian novel about mankind's battle with a genetic disease... I might post some excerpts in a bit. It's going to be a while before it's ready but I do want to get it published and know a few people who are going to help... May actually use it as a thesis since I'm in social sciences.. we shall see
     
  16. Domikatetrix

    Domikatetrix if your naaaaaaaaaaasty

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    i love writing but i hate doing it the rite way.. grammer.. i could never write a book... but i look foward to reading some of urs zilla!
     
  17. zilla939

    zilla939 Thought Police Lifetime Supporter

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    grammar is second nature for me, I taught a grammar class for incoming freshman at my high school for a couple of summers. There are a lot of rules, but once you know them, you're ace, and writing is a game. Plus, the more in control you are of your writing the more ways you figure out to bend dem rules...
     
  18. shadygrov

    shadygrov Member

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    I love to write and to punctuate. It's very elegant to formally write a thought or argument, and to be able to express your mind and give a desired feeling while put the reader in another world is an art. I love good writing, but I am not much in to reading classic literature...bores me for some reason. I like more modern stuff.
     
  19. vigilanteherbalist2

    vigilanteherbalist2 Senior Member

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    i was published at the bright young age of 5. i wish i was inspired enough to write, and that i had the time. but, i guess that's what i get for living my life for others.
     
  20. Diton

    Diton Banned

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    For some reason, even though I really would like to write a novel, I'm never able to come up with a story that interests me enough to write it. I think if I was going to write something, it would have to be more than just a story - it would have to have some kind of deeper meaning to it for me to be willing to invest the time to do it.
     
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