What if trees didn't exist?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StinkyGreen4me, Jul 25, 2004.

  1. StinkyGreen4me

    StinkyGreen4me Member

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    what if trees didn’t exist?
    a thought by charlie

    yesterday i went to the water
    with a “friend” of mine...
    and she told me that it was beautiful.
    i could hear the sounds that were around me,
    just belting out this hum, like I’ve never heard before.
    as we walked, my legs seemed to be getting heavier,
    and then we layed down and fell asleep.
     
  2. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    i love this.
     
  3. StinkyGreen4me

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  4. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    dude you have amazing talent. Your music rocks! I can't believe you're only 16. i love the line in the poem The Keeper ( A mellow guitar tune), that goes...

    "at least for now
    I have you
    at least for now I can hold you
    better than I can hold myself"



    That's awesome. Good shit man, keep up the good work.



     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    i like it alot, man. it was great! :)
     
  6. tripRBYday

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    I like your poem... is that about our walk together?
     
  7. StinkyGreen4me

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    yeah it is...
     
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