A confession...... When I was young and losing my hair soap scum in the attic a pearl in the ocean of Titan A grey stare in the..... whispers of grey The attic appears empty, under the sofa the stairs are bleached with my.... talcum powder hair curling iron When did we start when the oven is on, covert circulatiion of the wind. Just a jester cloaked and dagger of disguised antipathy, me thinks it is great the fragile Earth, hemesheres of eruptions with volcanic ash in my vestibule of sanctity If I say to the unclean be clean now, and go to teach in the house and to rise in my place will the music in my treacle sap, so that trees pine and roads meet at the intersection of tranquility requesterd Topple the doppleganger, pray or something in my diaper. To dispense of the plauges or or to rinse the wash clean in the ringer the phone placed in the ashtray tales understood in the mouthpiece, why under then in scrupulous intrigue. The old poets gather under the woods, teachers proseletize of wonders, sounds of words so pretty they search newly written plagerisms. In college the bard was without qualm and reached out to young minds in splintered syntax If every elbow was tipped the vine would be sapped and the sweet would taste in fresh nuances. Misery loves to forget what it praised so eagerly the day before the cataclysim The End of the proffecy of me.
Avant-garde poetry is great, man. I used to write a lot of it, but I haven't in a long time. This poem is a good example of it, and it hangs together very well with lots of interesting departures. I enjoyed it.
Enjoyed it trek! Lottsa fun. I'm no good at this style but enjoy reading it when done well. Dangles forth with a modicum of angularities towards parallelisms while hurling down the stairs towards the attic.
awesome work, here! love the surreal nature, the twisted word-play, the flow and the vibe you got going here.... thx mucho for this! what a great stanza
Thanks for all the possitive feedback. I will try to write somemore soon. I really enjoy this poetry forum a lot. It gives me an outlet for my creativity. I'ts like having your stuff published for free, well almost free. I am a forums supporter now. Anyway, I like reading the poetry on this forum. There is some good stuff appears here. Peace all.
