We Got That Mystical Funk

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  1. TiedyeDreams

    TiedyeDreams Member

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    A/N: Also on my facebook and my dA


    And the groove
    of your hip
    was made for a palm
    like mine
    to place
    to hold
    and to submerge my prints
    beneath your skin
    right in
    to your very
    bone.

    The grooves of
    your bones
    carved out like
    notches on
    a bedpost
    but I don't
    mind
    that your skin drapes
    like cheap fabric
    over your
    shoulders.

    When the grooves
    of the bass
    thrumming like
    a blues heartbeat
    out of your speakers and
    into my chest
    I know
    I'll be here
    in the morning.
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Very nice flow, and the imagery is very sensual, too. I like it.
     
  3. auri_rain

    auri_rain Olá!Eu sou alto como uma.

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    i love it:D
    great work!
     
  4. TiedyeDreams

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