Very Short - Lucy's Eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spiritchalist, Feb 5, 2009.

  1. Spiritchalist

    Spiritchalist Member

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    For Lucy who cries,
    Tears through her diamond eyes,
    Love lost, love spent,
    Ash of passion,
    Among the winds they fly,
    Don't miss the roses,
    as life passes us by,
    know that tomorrow brings a new dawn,
    and the only way to catch it,
    is to look ahead and beyond.

    Just wrote this off the top of my head for a crying friend
     
  2. Yummy Ukulele

    Yummy Ukulele Member

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    Is that a reference to Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds that I detect? ;)

    Otherwise, a very nice poem. And good for you for helping a friend out with the power of poetry.
     
  3. Spiritchalist

    Spiritchalist Member

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    Why, yes that would be a reference to Lucy in the Sky.

    And but of course, what better way to help? A picture is beautiful, words are sweet, so why not paint a picture with words! :)
     
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