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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Aditi, Jul 13, 2004.

  1. Aditi

    Aditi Member

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    We are finding our way

    Back to each other
    And He knew we never left
    For long or short
    To run around a little
    In the new grass
    And listen to the Spirit
    With our new sense

    It is a story
    We never stopped writing
    And we laugh fondly
    Wondering when we began
    The fine lines
    Feed the needle's head
    Gentle coaxing to gentle freedom
    Yes, death is our friend and partner
    We are finding our way



    [I-I love you I-I do
    The way you help me to remember
    By remembering One you remember all
    I laugh and cry at my blindness
    and oh the irony]
     
  2. mebesideme

    mebesideme Member

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    Remembering

    That would be an awesome title. I like it a lot. Is it a song?
     
  3. Aditi

    Aditi Member

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    greetings mebesideme (lovely name ;)
    i don't think it is a song, more like something i would say to some very old friends when i saw them again after being gone from them for a while

    remembering would be okay
    often reluctant to add a title onto things - finding i usually choose one that narrows the experience from its original magnitude
    thanks for sharing love :)
     
  4. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    The last stanza is amazing! You have a sweet voice.
     
  5. SunFree

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    Wow, i love it; especially the middle stanza.
     
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