i've danced with the devil looked him straight in the face he cast me back to earth then declared me a waste of space lost,confused no one to plead my case where do i go what direction do i take searching for answers but they all just seem so fake if jesus is real then baptize me right here in this lake cleanse me of all my sins make me whole catch me before i fall this life is beginning to put its toll on me im trapped in this disillusion just trying to be free pleading to the heavens why me, why me feel like falling to my knees to pray but then what would i began to say my mind running wild as i lay ponder the question why was i choosen to stay thought i'd never make it to see 26 though i'd never make it past the pushers,ho's and pimps NOW IM FREE NOW I KNOW THE TRUTH WALKING,RUNNING NEVER LOOKING BACK ON THE DAYS OF MY YOUTH
I loved the opening of this poem, and did you did a goo job sustaining the feeling of it. The mood of the poem seemed to shift a little from beginning to end; it seemed a little more lighthearted at first but got more serious as the poem progressed. I loved it though, it flowed beautifully and passionately.
