untitled poem

Discussion in 'The Psychedelic Experience' started by Reno91, Apr 21, 2011.

  1. Reno91

    Reno91 Member

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    I view your thoughts through a microscope, so trust the things i say

    But don't be shy, use our mind's eye and you might see things my way

    Put some trust in the gut, for it puts frowns upside and doesn't lead one astray

    Go ahead and thrust some trust, feel the truth, and you'll see the proof

    Then you can find that cozy spot that's not so hot where the satisfaction stays

    Let go of the fear, save yourself a tear, elude the illusions and skip all the confusion

    and start living today

    You're a dictator of your brain seth does that make you insane? a little i suppose

    but is there no other way?





    a little choppy but this is my first poem, thanks for reading and title suggestions would be really cool
     
  2. GK420

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    I usually can't stand most of the poetry I read because of how cheesy it is (and thank fuck I've finished all of my English exams full of depressing, corny and boring poems), but I gotta say I really like this poem.
     
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